i have some minor qualms with the horrible grammar and spelling from the supposed intellectual web echelon:

1. the word “your” is a possessive adjective. the word “you‘re” is the contraction form of “you are”.

2. finding “definately” in the english dictionary is impossible. but finding “definitely” is not.
3. a dozen “…”s between words and sentences never get any point across. you just seem like a blank slate.
4. injecting common words like “man,” “dude,” and “you know” into your writing can make it sound more realistic, but repeating those same terms over and over again for no good reason just depreciates any sign of intelligence in your words.